In English / Middle School | 2014-06-26

The sentence has one word that is incorrect. There was great excitement before the fireworks commenced.

Asked by EmeraldBierman

Answer (3)

Well, 'fireworks' should not have a space in it, but I think the real problem is 'excitement' .

Answered by AL2006 | 2024-06-10

There is a space in the word fireworks.

Answered by keegster | 2024-06-10

The word "commenced" in the sentence may feel overly formal. A better choice could be the simpler word "started." Therefore, the corrected sentence could be: "There was great excitement before the fireworks started."
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Answered by AL2006 | 2024-12-24

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