JY CHEN - Ask Anything, Learn Everything. Logo

In English / Middle School | 2014-09-25

Hi,

Please can you tell me if the text is well written in English? Can you correct my errors? Thank you to all.

The Mona Lisa was painted between 1503 and 1507 by Leonardo da Vinci. He was a fantastic artist and inventor. It's a painting from the Renaissance (16th century). It is the portrait of the wife of Francesco Giocondo, which is why its French title is "La Joconde" and in Italian, "Mona Lisa" (Madam Lisa in French). This painting measures 77 cm high and 53 cm wide. It is displayed in the painting section at the Louvre in Paris.

Asked by pandamille

Answer (3)

Hi Pandamille,
Have you ever seen the Mona Lisa in person? It's fantastic!
Here is an edit of what you wrote:
The Mona Lisa was painted between 1503 and 1507 by Leonardo da Vinci. He was a fantastic artist and inventor. The Mona Lisa was painted during the Renaissance in the 16th century. It is the portrait of the wife of Francesco Giocondo. The French title is "La Joconde" and in Italian it's called "Mona Lisa". (Madame Lisa is a French name.) The painting measures 77 cm high and 53 cm wide. It is displayed in the painting section at the Louvre in Paris.

Answered by rachelgottesman | 2024-06-10

Yes like how u wrote it test that is correct

Answered by Anonymous | 2024-06-10

I revised your text for clarity and accuracy, introducing a few changes for better flow. The Mona Lisa, painted by Leonardo da Vinci, portrays Lisa Gherardini and is displayed in the Louvre. It remains one of the most famous and discussed paintings in art history.
;

Answered by rachelgottesman | 2024-12-26